Today this memory came up in my Facebook feed from 4 years ago:
And this one from 8 years ago:
Funny how 8 years on this post is still just as pertinent as ever — 4 years on I’m still working on that same book!!!
At least I’m consistent 😀
We had a long weekend last weekend and I spent most of my Friday and Saturday tucked away in my writing room, sneaking out every now and then to watch movies with the kids and play board games (we discovered our old copy of the board game Zathura tucked away, so we introduced the kids to the movie and then played our very own version which was super fun 🙂 so much so that Musketeer #3 decided he wants to be an astronaut when he grows up).
I haven’t had so much fun writing in ages! I was totally in the zone and it was wonderful 🙂
You see, since the end of last year I’ve been stuck on the two last scenes I need to finalise before I can move on to the next section (which involves writing 12 brand new scenes). The reason being that these two scenes are pretty good but they’re written from Boudica’s perspective, and a big part of me feels, in this new dual-POV version, they should be written from Aiden’s perspective. So, as I’m sure you can appreciate, a huge conflict has been raging inside me, between that part of me which thinks I should just leave them as is and move on, and the other part of me which is adamant I should get it all right RIGHT NOW!
According to the first part of me – the one which thinks it’s okay to move on – the scenes are good enough to stay the way they are for now. It’s far more important to finish the book than to keep messing around with things over and over again. I can always go back and change the POV once the rewrite is done. But the second part of me – the part which is naggy and whiney (let’s call her Marge) – disagrees with this logic profusely and will not allow me move on until I’m completely satisfied with every scene that has preceded.
Well, over the weekend, Marge finally won. So I put down my metaphoric pen and printed a copy of my manuscript. Then, with a newfound determination blossoming inside my heart, I combed through my rewrite, scene by scene, making changes as I went and refusing to set aside a chapter until I was convinced I’d done my best.
Now, this may sound like a bugger of a thing to do, but I absolutely loved it! It was so gratifying to polish a scene to satisfaction, stick a smiley face sticker on the print out, and then move along to the next. So far I’ve finished 16 of a total 36 scenes. Once I get to those last two pesky scenes, I’ll attack them with gusto and transform them into Aiden-POV scenes Marge will be proud of.
And then FINALLY I’ll be able to charge forward with no regrets 🙂
That’s how many words I’m into the rewrite now.
That’s 54.66% of the way, if I calculate on the basis the novel will be 90k words (its current length).
6 scenes to go until I get to the diary entry scenes, which is the point I was hoping to reach by the end of the year. So I’m not too far off track 🙂
Then I’ll only have 12 new scenes to write before I get to the finale.
THE best part of all.
Last night I wrote 300 words on my fantasy novel – the first time in four months I’ve worked on the project. But the break was totally worth it. Finally I fixed the issues plaguing the beginning of The Mark of the Cagairáin (issues I wrote about in an earlier post HERE) and have a version I feel proud of 100%. It’s such an awesome feeling – and so freeing. I can move forward and finish my second novel knowing my first is the best it can be 😀
I’m so in love with my second novel – an adventure about friendship and accepting oneself, fears and foibles and all. And it’s full of creatures from Scandinavian folklore – creatures I’ve longed to write about for years. It’s so different from The Mark of the Cagairáin – there’s no romance, it’s dual pov, and I get to play with a new style of writing (more direct, less descriptive) for half the story.
You can follow my progress at the top of my blog (there is a progress bar in the header: A Nightmare’s Betrayal – Second Draft) as well as on Twitter. I will try to write a bit each night, and update after every session.
I will also try to post a bit more regularly on here, now that I am back in writing land.
Oh, and if you’ve missed any of my posts on The Print Posse over the past few months, you can also find links to them in the header (bottom right corner).
Hasta la vista, baby 😛
Woohoo! 2015 is upon us 😀
Well, to be precise, 2015 has been upon us for a few weeks now, but I only got back from Tasmania last night so it officially started for me today 😛
I thought I would write a little post about what I have planned for this year, and what I want to achieve. The list will no doubt grow and change as the year progresses, but I think it’s always good to have a jumping off point.
1. Rewrite my synopsis for The Mark of the Cagairáin – to be completed by the end of January.
I wrote a 1 page synopsis when I first started querying. But since then, my novel has undergone significant change, dropping from a whopping 105K to a nice, svelte 88.5 K. As such, my original synopsis doesn’t quite match any longer. I also need a 2-5 page synopsis to go with my 1 page synopsis. So off to the rewriting trenches I go.
2. Work with my Pitching Posse to set up our new website and maintain throughout the year – website to go live sometime in February.
Last year I participated in a pitch-writing workshop hosted by The Australian Writers Marketplace, and was fortunate enough to befriend 3 lovely ladies: Fiona Stevens, Gabrielle Stroud and Karen Evers. We’ve decided to set up a website together where we will post regularly about our writing journeys and perhaps even showcase some of our writing 😀 I’m very excited to be a part of this! Watch this space for more info as this progresses…
3. Finish the first draft of my fantasy novel – hopefully by end of April.
Currently, I’m just past half way.
4. Write a significant proportion of the second draft of my fantasy novel by the close of 2015.
5. I’m also thinking of compiling a few playlists and setting up some individual web pages for each of my novels. Oh, and posting more novel-related material on Pinterest.
Inspiration for a novel I’m not even close to starting – my modern adaptation of Knut Hamsun’s Victoria – has been whispering to me lately, particularly in the music sense. This is something I’m going to have to submit to – even if it means simply compiling a playlist and collating images.
6. On a personal note, attend my high school graduation 20 year reunion on August 22.
7. Finish watching Buffy and Angel with my eldest. And then maybe move onto Twin Peaks.
On the topic of TV series, I’m really looking forward to season five of Teen Wolf and catching up on the last season of Revenge. And seeing Outlander, of course. When I was in Tassie, I also started re-watching The Lying Game – I absolutely love that show (and watching Blair Redford is definitely a treat 😉 ) Shame it never got a third season.
Anyways, that’s about it for now. Fingers crossed every one of these goals gets the tick of completion 😀
I’ve had the most awesome week!
Last Thursday the boys and I went Trick or Treating at Sunnybank Shopping Town. On Friday for Halloween, Cole and I dined on burgers at Grill’d (Cole had the sweet chilli chicken and I had the crispy bacon and cheese) before catching Ghostbusters on the big screen. On Saturday, we met up with family at Boondall lake and watched model boat racing for the day. Then all this week, Cole and I watched Season 1 of Buffy 😀
It was the first time Cole’s actually sat down and watched Buffy episode-by-episode, and I’m very happy to report he enjoyed it! Of course, I’m not surprised – he is a Doctor Who fan after all and can appreciate great writing when he sees it 😀 Tomorrow we start Season 2 – I can’t wait.
Speaking of Doctor Who, the season 8 finale aired this morning. Cole and I will be catching it sometime this evening, once the littlies have gone to bed and we can watch without distraction. I really hope it lives up to expectations. Last week’s episode was exceptional and the massive Missy bomb was totally beyond all expectations. I found this season a little hit and miss though, but I have faith in the Doctor Who crew. They’ll make magic happen again, I just know it.
On another note, I’m very excited to announce that a writer friend of mine was offered a publishing deal with Evernight Publishing this week, for her romantic suspense novel, Desperate. Congratulations, Athena Daniels! I can’t wait to read your masterpiece once it is released to the world 😀
Progress on my WIP is coming along nicely. I’m currently working on scene 20 (of 39) of my first draft – so I’m just past halfway. I’m taking my time with it though – balancing it with my family time and work time. It’s only one more year until Sebby starts school so I want to be available to him as much as possible and not completely lost in my work. There will be plenty of time for me-time once the boys are older. One thing I learned with Cole is how fast they grow up – I mean, gosh, he’s starting high school next year, and it doesn’t seem that long ago that I was trotting him off to prep! I’m just so glad I get to enjoy the little-kiddie years one more time with Sebby and Dom. It’s lovely (albeit crazy at times).
The law firm is going well. We have our first few clients now, and this weekend we started our marketing campaign. So, all things going well, business should start kicking off very soon.
On a final note, I recently finished playing the 20th anniversary remake of one of my favourite 90s games, Gabriel Knight: Sins of the Fathers. I have to say, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The soundtrack is amazing and the graphics phenomenal. It made me fall in love with New Orleans all over again, and tickled that urge inside me once again to travel. Of course, that will have to wait.
Anyways, that’s enough from me for today. I’m going to go now and tap out some more of scene 20 and then, once Dom wakes up, pick up Cole from his ong ba noi’s.
See you on the other side of the TARDIS!
PS. Only 5 weeks til Tassie! Woohoo!
I must apologise for my absence in the past few months as life has been extremely hectic. I’ve been drafting my fantasy novel, plotting book two in my Whisperer series, and reworking the plot of book number one so that the pace of first half of the novel now better matches the second half (a wonderful side effect being that my word count has significantly shrunk from a bloated 105,000 to a svelte 88,500). And then, of course, there has been all my “re-entering the workforce” preparation (I know, I know, I said I’d never do law again)…
All in all, though, I have to say, life is good 😀
Anyways, I thought I’d make a short appearance (so you know I’m still alive and kicking and banging my head against the wall and enjoying every minute of it) and share with you a little something that always makes me smile when I read it – namely, Stephen King’s “On Writing” (btw this is a book I reread every year or so because it is just so damn amazing)…
Mr King (can I call him Stephen??) states that to become a good writer you must read a lot and write a lot and then he talks briefly about what exactly constitutes “a lot” when it comes to writing. He looks at different writers and how much they write in a sitting and then suggests what he thinks is a good goal for a new writer to aim for. Here is an excerpt from his book that I think is funny (especially given my history of notoriously slow writing)…
If “read a lot, write a lot” is the Great Commandment—and I assure you that it is—how much writing constitutes a lot? That varies, of course, from writer to writer. One of my favorite stories on the subject—probably more myth than truth—concerns James Joyce.
According to the story, a friend came to visit him one day and found the great man sprawled across his writing desk in a posture of utter despair.
“James, what’s wrong?” the friend asked. “Is it the work?”
Joyce indicated assent without even raising his head to look at the friend. Of course it was the work; isn’t it always?
“How many words did you get today?” the friend pursued.
Joyce (still in despair, still sprawled facedown on his desk): “Seven.”
“Seven? But James . . . that’s good, at least for you!”
“Yes,” Joyce said, finally looking up. “I suppose it is . . . but I don’t know what order they go in!”
Oh my, I love it 🙂